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Post by pooth46 on Jan 26, 2012 16:45:41 GMT -5
I'm have trouble putting it up but I'll get there
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Post by nomellte on Jan 26, 2012 16:51:06 GMT -5
Hmm, im interested.
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Post by pooth46 on Jan 26, 2012 17:01:00 GMT -5
The Adventures of Minecraft Tim Kent, Brandon Batz, and Dan Lovas were best friends and they went to the same school. But this school was like no other. It had virtual reality equipment. They used it to train the mind. Some times when they get to play games on it. Today they got that opportunity. So they played Minecraft. But today the office told them not to go on, but seeing how this was a rare event they did it anyway. Five minutes later the system failed and they were still stuck in it. When they tried to get out it wouldn’t let them. They realized that they were stuck in the game. They now had to stay a live in Minecraft. Tim said “Well crap I think we might be stuck.” Dan said “I think you’re right we’re going to have to live till they fix it, but if we die in here we die in real life”. Brandon said “Well the first thing we’re going to have to do is build a house”. They started to build a small house, but before they were done night came. Tim said “whoa snap let hurry up and finish this house”. They finished just in time. They waited till day. Then they needed food so they made a farm and an orchard of trees so they have an unlimited amount of wood. Three days later in real life (nine days in Minecraft) they realized that it was going to be a very long time before they were free. They needed to get armor and weapons, so they went looking for a cave. It took them some time but they found weapons and armor to make it. Good thing they made stone swords and stone pickaxes. They right away found coal and iron so they had that going for them, but that they needed diamonds. Then the weirdest thing happen they saw that some else has joined. It was one of the teachers. They yelled for help and he responded. It was the technology teacher Mr. Quimby. He said “You have to go and find the main control center in the Ender to get out and we will have to turn monsters on to place it. This will not be easy. Be careful”. Then he was gone. They had to find the control center to get out of Minecraft. As soon as they came out of the cave they saw so many monsters. Tim said “crap we‘re screwed we’re going to have to fight to get to the house”. They started running as fast as they could. Dodging arrows and explosions, Endermen, and Zombies. They finally got there but barley. Brandon said “We’re going need to find an Ender portal and activate it.” Dan said “Well first we need to get to the Nether and slay some Blazes to get the blazed rods.” Tim said “Um I have a diamond mine about three days travel from here.” “When the heck did you mine that?” said Brandon and Dan at the same time. “Well before we were friends I mined a small mine and I fell into a cavern full of diamonds. I hid it so no one would steal them.” Tim said. They smelted the iron to make tools and weapons. In the morning they set off for the mine every night they just built a small dirt house and fell asleep. When they got to the house Tim dug up the hole and got ready for the deadly mine. “We’ll need to get as much as possible.” Said Tim. They went down and the found it they were in aw. A whole cavern full of diamonds. But Dan’s creeper senses were acting up. He told them to be on they guard. Brandon saw something he yelled CREEPERS! They rushed to get as many diamonds as possible. Creeper’s hissed all around as they ran. Tim was yelling “RUN FASTER!” he pulled out an enchanted bow one. Now that monster are on it will be a lot harder. They had to get and said “That’s a nice live you have there, it’d be a shame if something happened to It.” and shot an arrow. BOOM the arrow hit a creeper and it exploded taking out seven creepers and making the tunnel clasp. “Holy crap that was to close. At lest we got the diamonds.” Said Brandon. “Ow I think a rock hit my head” said Dan. They looked up the mine was coming down. They ran for the ladder. They barely made it out alive Tim said “look what I got” he had a stack of Eye’s of the Ender. They could find an Ender portal. They made diamond gear and tools. Tim made 200 arrows and TNT knowing what’s ahead. He trough one up in the air and it went to the Ender portal. They realized that it wasn’t to far away from his mine. So they set up a house. Dan started to dig, Brandon laddered the way down, and Tim makes a cake for everyone. They all ate some and returned to digging. “Aw my shovel broke” said Dan. Tim though him another one “I’m not going to use mine” said Tim. They continued digging until they fell to the stronghold. Dan looked down and saw the silver fish spawner. “HOLY CRAP” said Dan. He quickly took out the spawner. “That was to close” said Brandon “don’t break any blocks” Tim came down and lit the portal and went though “The Ender, I was hoping I was never to come back here” said Tim Dan and Brandon Said “What?” he explained to them that he was a master at this game and that the server was years old that’s why he had the mine. Suddenly the Ender Dragon came down and missed them barely. They started going to the towers to take out the regeneration crystals. Tim took out the rest for them with his bow when he got up the first one. The epic battle was on. When the dragon was almost dead, it dived down and was going for Dan. Brandon pushed Dan out of the way and got hit full force from the dragon. “NOOOO Brandon” said Dan “These last few days have been the Best days of my life to bad it has to end.” Said Brandon slowly dying. Tim came down to see if he could help, but by the time he got down there he was dead. Dan went in to a huge rage. He moved so fast it was like he was flying he killed the dragon and ate its heart. The control center appeared and they went in to it and two portals appeared. One said Real life the other said Minecraft life they had to choose. “We’re going to have to choose” said Tim. “I have to go back I made a promise to Brandon” said Dan “Well I’m staying in here” said Tim “I’ll be fine” “Well it’s been fun I’ll see you later” said Dan “I’ll come back again” They hugged and said good bye and went though the portals. Dan came out of the virtual reality and told the teachers what happened and understood after words he went to Brandon’s mother and father and told them they were heat broken. Tim made a castle above the ender portal so if he ever wanted to go back he could. Dan visited him a few times a month and they partied. Tim became the king of Minecraft and anyone who went on known to respect him. Dan grew old and before he died he went back to the school to say good bye to Tim. “You haven’t aged a day old friend” said Dan “how did you do it?” “I live in minecraft” said Tim “my real body may be gone my mind is still alive, you can live in here to.” He said yes and they lived forever.
The End
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Post by pooth46 on Jan 26, 2012 17:01:16 GMT -5
i got it yes i have a lot of spelling mistake
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Post by nomellte on Jan 27, 2012 9:36:25 GMT -5
That was quite cool, actually. Try adding some more descriptions of places, items etc..
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Post by pooth46 on Jan 27, 2012 17:54:00 GMT -5
well the whole point is to have plot holes otherwise it would be 9 pages long and it's already 6 pages i triple the requirements for the assignment i had to do for reading class
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